Good effort, Bom. Some of your work overlaps - could you amend this? Also, music might be good to add over the top. Is there anything else that you think is important to note about your target audience? Does this help you develop ideas for your magazine?
Good effort, Bom. Some of your work overlaps - could you amend this? Also, music might be good to add over the top. Is there anything else that you think is important to note about your target audience? Does this help you develop ideas for your magazine?
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